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Trifextra: Week Sixty

March 23, 2013

For this weekend’s Trifextra Challenge, we were given three words and asked to add another 33 to them to make a complete 36-word response.

The three words are:





‘The day we remember the men lost in the rebellion; the angels and the clouds mustered.  As the rain gently fell it mingled with our tears. Delivered from the cruelty of the dictator, thankfully we smiled’


15 Comments leave one →
  1. March 23, 2013 1:18 pm

    Nice thoughts here – can you change it to present tense so the word is REMEMBER? Otherwise – well done.

  2. March 24, 2013 4:35 am

    It reminded me of those delivered from the Hitler Regime. Well done.

    • March 24, 2013 8:19 am

      Yes I am sure this can relate to any cruel dictatorship. _/\_x past and those more recent.

  3. Draug419 permalink
    March 24, 2013 11:23 am

    I like the bit of hope at the end in the smile (:

    • March 24, 2013 11:39 am

      Yes, there is hope … today is the International day of truth! _/\_ x

  4. nessa1313 permalink
    March 24, 2013 12:47 pm

    I like “the angels and the clouds mustered.” I can see them on the battlefield.

  5. March 24, 2013 3:09 pm

    Waiting for the angels …..

  6. March 24, 2013 6:23 pm

    Such a sad-sweet piece:-)

  7. kymminbarcelona permalink
    March 24, 2013 6:56 pm

    Liked the tears mingling with rain. Always remember.

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