Trifextra: Week Sixty
March 23, 2013
For this weekend’s Trifextra Challenge, we were given three words and asked to add another 33 to them to make a complete 36-word response.
The three words are:
remember
rain
rebellion
‘The day we remember the men lost in the rebellion; the angels and the clouds mustered. As the rain gently fell it mingled with our tears. Delivered from the cruelty of the dictator, thankfully we smiled’
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Nice thoughts here – can you change it to present tense so the word is REMEMBER? Otherwise – well done.
Oops thanks Barbara _/\_
It reminded me of those delivered from the Hitler Regime. Well done.
Yes I am sure this can relate to any cruel dictatorship. _/\_x past and those more recent.
I like the bit of hope at the end in the smile (:
Yes, there is hope … today is the International day of truth! _/\_ x
I like “the angels and the clouds mustered.” I can see them on the battlefield.
Yes a foreboding mass! 🙂
Waiting for the angels …..
they will come ! _/\_ xx
Such a sad-sweet piece:-)
Thank you _/\_ xx
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Liked the tears mingling with rain. Always remember.
Thank You! _/\_ x