Trifextra: Week Fifty-Nine
March 16, 2013
This weekend we’ are required to write exactly 33 words inspired by the following photo.
The little boy seemingly perturbed by the increasing mist; leapt the glassy puddles to where his mother stood. The girl stooped to search for the coin she’d seen glinting in the half light.
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I like how we are all seeing different things in the same picture. 🙂
Yes I do to! and also they way we do it. I am in awe of the sophistication of some. _/\_ x
Hi Helen! Your entry is a lot like mine – a very literal description. I focused on the little boy as well.
I just wish I could be less literal and more creative; I am in good company though so I will learn 🙂
I like this! Such a simple, lovely little scene.
Two lovely stories from one picture – wonderful!
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This is terrific. You painted the picture well with your words.
Beautiful! Very simple, very clear.
I like the literal interpretation which is a challenge with a surreal scene.
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I am a practical lady; surreal is not easy for me yet … I liked your post very much 🙂