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Trifextra: Week Fifty-Nine

March 16, 2013

This weekend we’ are required to write exactly 33 words inspired by the following photo.


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The little boy seemingly perturbed by the increasing mist; leapt the glassy puddles to  where his mother stood. The girl stooped to search for the coin she’d seen glinting in the half light.


11 Comments leave one →
  1. March 16, 2013 6:26 am

    I like how we are all seeing different things in the same picture. 🙂

    • March 16, 2013 6:29 am

      Yes I do to! and also they way we do it. I am in awe of the sophistication of some. _/\_ x

  2. March 16, 2013 12:53 pm

    Hi Helen! Your entry is a lot like mine – a very literal description. I focused on the little boy as well.

    • March 17, 2013 10:29 am

      I just wish I could be less literal and more creative; I am in good company though so I will learn 🙂

  3. Draug419 permalink
    March 16, 2013 1:41 pm

    I like this! Such a simple, lovely little scene.

  4. March 16, 2013 2:19 pm

    Two lovely stories from one picture – wonderful!

  5. March 16, 2013 5:06 pm

    This is terrific. You painted the picture well with your words.

  6. March 16, 2013 7:55 pm

    Beautiful! Very simple, very clear.

  7. March 17, 2013 7:54 pm

    I like the literal interpretation which is a challenge with a surreal scene.

    • March 17, 2013 9:12 pm

      I am a practical lady; surreal is not easy for me yet … I liked your post very much 🙂

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