Trifextra: Week Fifty-Eight
March 9, 2013
This is my response to the Trifecta week writing challenge to give a 33 word ‘story’ using the word ‘stone’ with any definition.
As I am not the most ‘creative’ writer I am happier that ‘they’ are looking for a serious entry. However I cannot judge whether it is well-conceived; only others can tell … kindly!
‘There is a stone; hard and heavy as lead that wears down the bravest soul. Its rough edge leaves an angry sore almost beyond repair. However the same inside a an oyster shell …’
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Coat Hanger Doll's House 
nice…
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This is very good.
I love the image of the irritation caused by the stone, and relating it to a pearl forming in an oyster.
I think you have an extra ‘a’ in the last sentence: “…inside a an oyster shell.”
Great job with the prompt. And what Janna says. 🙂
I love what the open sentence implies (: Let’s hope a nice pearl develops quickly.
Its does! and it is !! I am sure _/\_ x
Always love the story of pearls.
I haven’t thought too deeply about it before but it is a lovely concept. I wonder if an oyster can improve his lot. _/\_ xx