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Trifextra: Week Fifty-Six … Bizzy Lizzy

February 23, 2013

A word game from Trifecta, choose 33 words from page 33 of  Olive Kitteridge by Elizabeth Stroud.  and reshape those words into a piece of your own.  Your piece does not have to tell an entire story

page 33

The incoming tide lapping at the water’s edge.  
The sailboat waited, for the woman with the child wrapped in a blanket. Who had hung the impatiens and wild violets by the front door?

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14 Comments leave one →
  1. February 23, 2013 12:06 pm

    Oh, I like this! Who did, indeed?

  2. February 23, 2013 2:22 pm

    Nice!

    • February 23, 2013 3:04 pm

      Thank you… it is very strange that just a few words can move a little community and communication I am touched. _/\_ xx

  3. Draug419 permalink
    February 23, 2013 4:03 pm

    Very cool! I love it.

    • February 24, 2013 9:03 am

      I struggled … but I see some better interpretations _/\_ x

  4. February 23, 2013 5:08 pm

    Very nice combination. Poignant.

  5. February 23, 2013 5:42 pm

    who indeed? The plot thickens. 🙂

  6. Cobbie's World permalink
    February 24, 2013 3:36 pm

    Well-constructed little scene you have created out of those 33 words. Nothing to indicate that this is sinister in nature, maybe just a family friend having dropped by earlier while they were out? Who knows? That’s the beauty of a well-written mystery. Good job!

  7. kymminbarcelona permalink
    February 25, 2013 10:07 am

    Nice, bucolic scene.
    Where was ‘incoming’, though?

    • February 25, 2013 1:41 pm

      Oh oops(perhaps I wanted it to be there) with, your eagle eye you should be a librarian. I am not going to check, at first I didn’t understand your comment and was gong to reply with a mysterious retort. So slightly embarrassed I say thanks for feedback., but more important the visit that was very nice! 🙂

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