100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#77
February 13, 2013
Prompt …oh my goodness! I nearly forgot…
It feels so strange; the piercing sunlight with its silver golden glow on my eyes. I welcome the warmth on my back as I turn from the gate on my way to work. Even the pock marked pavements sparkle. Tiny bright green shoots peep between the cracks and the previous autumn leaves. I surprise a blackbird; singing in the hedge while his mate forages in the undergrowth for tasty morsels by the bus-stop. How peculiar; the children and the beloved carers wander to school, daring not to button up their coats and un-twirl their scarfs. They laugh and chatter. My goodness I nearly forgot winter is over!
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It does seem a long winter this year. A nice reminder of the better things to come.
It has been so dreary …Thank you for visiting and bringing cheer _/\_ xx
anticipation! love it!
Hey this one is really very very very very nice.. the ending gave a smile, big smile. I felt a wintry breeze passing by me.. loved it..
btw, could u plz read n review my very first attempt? plz..
its a short romantic story ..
http://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/romance-short-story-tonight-you-are-mine/
Thank you for visiting and kind comments. I will read your short story with pleasure ! _/\_ xx
I’ll be eagerly waiting.. any criticism is welcomed too 🙂
And my comment was very genuine, no buttering..!