100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week #43
May 24, 2012

The Match
….the flame flickered before….

Long before we started to save the planet; and trying not to sound like an old Monty Python joke, my mother was a dab hand at using a single match economically. This was not possible without her womanly skills as multitasker. She could light the fire and the Aladdin Mantle Lamp and return its glass cover in the sitting room. Then, ignite the primus stove in the kitchen, returning to the fireside where my father would be listening to the weather forecast on the radio, to light his cigarette as the flame flickered before it went out.
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Like this – and have passed the challenge on to my writers’ group
And I can’t even light a couple of candles without burning my fingers. Nice one.
Excellent use of the prompt.
Good one; love the realness of this piece.
I could see her going about and doing this.
Very nice …
Isadora http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2012/05/25/the-flame-flickered/
I like the use of the phrase at the end of the sentence.
I love the “long before we started to save the planet” idea. It’s true the generations before us were much more economical than we are…