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Five Sentence Fiction … Detour

October 17, 2012

Wood Sampler 

As the woman packed hers son’s last few items into his kit bag she paused. Remembering her childhood; stolen soon after puberty, with her hand on her belly a mass to protect her now dysfunctional womb. Four fine sons were her only reward; but two had died in the war and the other missing.  The boy gathered his bags and strode to the waiting truck without a backward glance.  She picked up her sampler left undone for the last 20 years and began stitching.

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  1. Lillie McFerrin (@LillieMcFerrin)'s avatar
    October 17, 2012 8:39 pm

    So much emotion packed in those sentences! Beautiful writing 🙂

  2. injaynesworld's avatar
    October 18, 2012 4:09 pm

    Beautifully written, Helen.

  3. ami811blog's avatar
    September 25, 2016 9:45 am

    Poignant…love reading your blog. Thank you.

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