Five Sentence Fiction … Detour
October 17, 2012
As the woman packed hers son’s last few items into his kit bag she paused. Remembering her childhood; stolen soon after puberty, with her hand on her belly a mass to protect her now dysfunctional womb. Four fine sons were her only reward; but two had died in the war and the other missing. The boy gathered his bags and strode to the waiting truck without a backward glance. She picked up her sampler left undone for the last 20 years and began stitching.
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So much emotion packed in those sentences! Beautiful writing 🙂
Thank You I enjoyed writing it 🙂
Beautifully written, Helen.
Thank you …
Poignant…love reading your blog. Thank you.